Wow, I think this is one of the most down to earth and helpful writing guides I have ever read. You're not pretentious or talking me down or overwroght with "Well I don't have this problem myself but as you do I guess I'll bestow my infinite wisdom on you" tone that I see in SO MANY writing guides and I have gone through many. Plus you actually give us help that I can do that I know will work for me in the actual writing PROCESS.

So good Cleo, thanks a million. Seriously. Can't wait for the next part.